Monday, August 15, 2005

and just like that its over

yet why do I feel more at peace within myself than I have felt all year?

5 Comments:

Blogger Christina said...

oh well, if you're just gonna *tease* us all :P

7:00 pm  
Blogger Jared said...

Nope wrong answer. Although a neverending cup of smooth black coffee which was perpetually hot would be a close second...

Also, just because the two posts are posted consecutively does not necessarily mean that they are related...

4:01 pm  
Blogger Hannah said...

Well, your posts do seem like they'd go together - similar styles, short and to the point!
Also your headings have an element of cohesion because you've repeated the word 'over' and also in the 2nd post (ie, this one), you used the word 'it' which is a reference word, and the only Reference item you've used (that I can see, or choose to see)- is 'love' (or 'falling in love'), so that when us not-in-the-know people read it, we naturally assume that it refers to the love you've fallen into as you've offered no other explanations for us! : )

Ok, that's enough of me trying to analyse your language for one day!! : )

5:41 pm  
Blogger Jared said...

Wow you poor woman. Assuming that within me there is any logical cohesion or rational train of thought.

9:13 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hee hee. Not only is it coherant it is also cohesive :P
-Ruth

1:38 pm  

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